I actually forgot why I named my blog でんき. But it sounds cool right? haha
I like the last one, but there's no Katakana in it.I think everyone can connect with your first haiku. Distractions are always a problem on mine.The last line of the second one confuses me just a little in the context of the haiku. Phonetically though, it sounds good.
Your haikus are very funny. The last line of your second haiku was very different from the first two lines and it kind of confused me.
あなたのはいくはとてもおもしろいです。このはいくがすきです。
いいですね〜カタカナは ふたつ だけ まりせんね。それでも、おもしろいです。わたしも あさごはんお たべません。でも、げんきじゃありません。
Wow haha four comments. That's the most I v ever got. Thank you for your suggestions guys. As for the second one, what I was trying to say was:ColumbiaLife is hardmom and dad (cuz life is hard here so I can't stop but think about my home and parents).
I like the last one, but there's no Katakana in it.
ReplyDeleteI think everyone can connect with your first haiku. Distractions are always a problem on mine.
The last line of the second one confuses me just a little in the context of the haiku. Phonetically though, it sounds good.
Your haikus are very funny. The last line of your second haiku was very different from the first two lines and it kind of confused me.
ReplyDeleteあなたのはいくはとてもおもしろいです。このはいくがすきです。
ReplyDeleteいいですね〜
ReplyDeleteカタカナは ふたつ だけ まりせんね。それでも、おもしろいです。
わたしも あさごはんお たべません。でも、げんきじゃありません。
Wow haha four comments. That's the most I v ever got. Thank you for your suggestions guys. As for the second one, what I was trying to say was:
ReplyDeleteColumbia
Life is hard
mom and dad (cuz life is hard here so I can't stop but think about my home and parents).